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Writing posts people finish

A practical editing pass for social copy: the first line, the one-idea rule, the ending, and the specific cuts that raise completion.

Reach gets you seen. Completion gets you distributed — every current feed ranking system treats "read to the end" or "swiped to the last slide" as a strong quality signal. It is also the thing most easily fixed after the draft exists.

Four edits, in order.

Edit 1: cut everything before the first interesting sentence

Most drafts open with a warm-up: context, a restatement of the topic, a throat-clearing "let's talk about". Find the first sentence that would make a stranger keep reading and delete everything above it.

This one edit is worth more than the other three combined, and it is almost always available.

Edit 2: one idea, ruthlessly

If your post has two ideas, it has two audiences and no momentum. Split it. You now have two posts and a week of content instead of one confusing one.

The test: can you say what the post is about in one clause, without "and"? If not, split it.

Edit 3: make it lumpy

Uniform sentence length reads as machine-written and scrolls past. Break one sentence into three words. Let another run long. Use a line break where a comma would do.

White space is not wasted space in a feed — it is what makes a post look finishable at a glance, which is what determines whether anyone starts.

Edit 4: delete the last sentence

Almost every draft ends with a summary of itself. Delete it. Then look at the new last sentence: it should either land the point hard or ask for one specific thing. If it does neither, delete that too.

Good endings: a single concrete question, a one-line restatement of the sharpest claim, or one instruction. Bad endings: "What do you think?", "Let me know below!", and anything beginning "In conclusion".

The specifics that do the heavy lifting

  • Numbers. "Four rounds to two" beats "fewer rounds". Any real figure beats any adjective.
  • Time. "In March" gives a sentence a place to stand.
  • A small failure. The thing that went wrong is the part people reply to, and the part nobody else can write.
  • Words your customers use. Not the words on your homepage. Read your own support inbox and steal from it.

A five-minute checklist

  1. Does the first line work with zero context?
  2. Is there exactly one idea?
  3. Is there at least one real number, name or date?
  4. Did I delete the summary ending?
  5. Does the last line ask for something specific?
  6. Is the essential part above the truncation point?

Check where each feed cuts your post off.

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